its good but it could be better. ^_^
Author Comments
i made this cartoon for the specific purpose of making people happy
Did you sing and animate this? You (or whoever sang it) sound a little mic-shy: hitting the right notes, but not letting your whole voice out. The color scheme contains a lot of yellow, generally seen as a happy color, but is that it? Yellow does go well with blue, so why not put a bit more of that in there?
The reason I rated this 2.5 rather than 3 or 3.5 is because, while the drawing is all right, there's just not much there as far as animation goes. Is it happy? Yes. It gets the message across. But what else is there? It's just a guy moving his feet with a lot of yellow around him to go with a song. I honestly think this would have been better off as just a song. Either that or you could elaborate on the animation: make your guy do something happy like eat ice cream or be nice to people. Happy things, like little girls smiling, cute kittens, people helping each other, etc.
It wasn't bad, really. It just wasn't all it could have been. Just my opinion. Feel free to take it into consideration or discard it or consider some parts and discard others. Whichever you prefer.
Khris responds:
you're right this isn't really an in-deapth cartoon like some of my others, i just wanted to take a moment from peoples lives to show them something simple that has the potential to make them crack a smile, i appreciate everything you're saying though :)
fun, but nothing happens: i could turn on the radio
I think it would have been happier with the sound of the breeze or animals or children laughter or something. The song was loud and kind of irritating, and the creepy boy/girl staring into my soul was... unnerving.
Khris responds:
thats me and i'm staring into the horizon
You might want to credit the artist.
The stars