You have the right idea and it seems like it could be an interesting watch, if a lot more care went into the making of this animation. I suggest increasing the frame rate for starters. The general character movement is elementary at best, so I suggest to watch other stick animations more closely, so you can see how to adjust the movements of your characters to make them smoother. The cursor monster was a neat idea. I gave you a 1 out of 5. Keep trying, you'll get it.

I think this was a six year old's attempt at a flash.

Can't help but feel this was some youngster's first attempt at flash... If there were something worth rating perhaps I'd have given a half-star... alas...

You need to put a lot more effort into this stuff.

MS Paint slideshows are not good mediums for movie making.

very slow n choppy animation, but I'll give ya half a credit for makin it