okay.. first, stay away from the gradients.. 2. work on your buttons, I had some trouble getting them to work. 3RD, always spend more time on the graphics then the story line. Last but not least.. dont just throw something up so you got something in the portal you could lose it to the crowd and ruin something that could have been rate worthy later on with some devoted time.

I gave you 2.5 STARS, I think you rushed your debut. Keep at it and give us late nighters a good watch.
Thanks