Has room for improvement, but really it looks like the sketchbook of a pretty awesome stick flash. A little more time and refinement and you'll be up there with whats it called... xaio xaio?
Anyway I liked it, but as I said, could use some refinement. Keep at it. 3/5
cheers

This video's story line is terrible. It doesn't have any build-up or break down. Not only this, But some of the objects used where animated terribly. Like the robot. It didn't move, it looked like a single picture the whole time it was in the film. And the green final weapon's eyes didn't move the entire time. Plus the dialog had the feel of a third grader. The only good part about this entire animation is the fight scene with the green guy. Although a little jumpy and ended way to quickly without much struggle, It still had a very "Intense" feel to it.

you have alooot of potential.you are obviuosly skilled enough to make better flashes though.meaning grafics design and making voices rather then having to read what they say.i encourage u to make more flashes .make them sharper and better story lines.do this and you will defenetly be making 5 star rating flashes.