Nice, i like your animation very fast and cool.
Author Comments
Tytrun the Hedgehog, the hero of this story?
Yes. problem is... he's being hunted.
yah see... Tytrun is a Hunter, he has been one throughout his whole life, But now... He is the hunted!
:Credits:
Story by: marti031
Characters:
Tytrun the Hedgehog
Mighty the Armadillo
Keith the Hedgehog
Sprites:
Mighty the Aramdillo- Themystical forestzone
Tytrun the Hedgehog-
(Made by me)Deviantart
Keith the hedgehog-
(made by ZorentheHedgehog)Devianta rt
Music:
Rising Sun Hikari Rock version.
Background:
Themysticalforestzone
Special thanks to: Waelalzflazh
ZorentheHedgehog
Tal9x9
marti031 responds:
thanks
That white hedgehog looks like Aeon.:/
marti031 responds:
its not
Animation-
It was decent, you're improving, but you need to find yourself a good style, try not making it look like DBZ, unless of course that's what you like, yet i'm warning you, people HATE that.
the effects were perfectly instruct, not too overused and in good quality.
You made tytrun looking pretty good, and he reminds a little of sonic but like his light side.
you should put the text in boxes and make them pass slower.
the skewing here was terrible, i'm sorry but it wasn't made good, but it's ok, it's the first time you tried it.
3/5
Music-
music was very good, and it matched the atmosphere.
sounds were too loud and overused, you should let our eras rest from time to time.
4/5
Story-
yeah this is where i can see you were tired and just wanted to upload the damn video.
tytrun and mighty fight for no reason then they meet someone bad they team up.
not so good, and don't you dare calling this an episode!
put some more thought to the text and story that could be very good!
1/5
Directing-
great.
v-cam was a bit stiff but it's ok.
just how everything moved so smoothly and matched the music, it was just good!
3.5/5
overall: 2.8
it's a bad animation...not.
it's a bad starting to a series, if you got read of the story, this would've get a high score.
as for animation it was good.
marti031 responds:
Thanks man, i'll keep that in mind
Not that good at all. The animation is the only thing saving it from a total zero. It seems like it was written by a 7 year old. "Tytrun and Mighty meet one day, and they decide they don't like eachother so they fight, then the bad guy Kieth shows up and they decide to be friends and fight him, because Tytrun says Kieth is under a spell."
Put a little more effort into the story, then I can give a higher score, because right now, everything is acceptable EXCEPT for that. I really do hope this gets blammed, not for the fact that I dislike it, but for the fact that it's a shitty place for the story to build off of. You can start off the series better than that.
i liked it a bit choppy at times but overall nothing to kill the fact that its solid and it has lots of promise cant wait to see more
marti031 responds:
I know