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Master Roho's Training

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This is my first commercial animation. Hope you like it!

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NEver try to outshine the mastaaaaa...

theamazingjamez responds:

Oh yeah. Roho's got lots to teach our man

A preloader would be very helpful; when I first clicked the "Play" button I thought it was broken. For the flash itself, stick figures are never a good choice unless animated really well or done in a Cynaide & Happiness style. But I'll disregard that for now since this is your first animation.

The fighting itself was good, very well animated and smooth. With the relatively short amount of dialogue, it's difficult to see what all of this will amount to. A trainer and a student trying to be as good as the trainer. That in itself sounds familiar but as the plot unfolds in the future this probably won't be much of a problem.

My final complaint, which is a mild one, is the menu. Menus aren't important, but if you want to maintain a professional outlook, then a nicer menu then Times New Roman text and squares with text on them would have to do. In terms of reference material, I'd look at some of the stuff from Armor Games and on the frontpage to get a good feel.

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cool man you remind me of my self when i just got flash good but needs lots and lots practaise i am a pro in flash aniamtion need any help ask me.

theamazingjamez responds:

Thanks! I scorn the help of no one!

sort of short but cool fighting

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Uploaded
Mar 6, 2012
10:41 PM EST
Genre
Action
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video
flash