for a new guy this animation is great, but not perfect. you could use some more detail and a little practice. comedy is tough to get, but practice and you can get it
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This is my first animation, (well officially second, but my first one was just a stupid loop) So i know it's not earth shatteringly good.. but well anyway i hope you like it!
Greg is filled with sadness because he cannot live the life he has always dreamed of..
Thanks for the encouraging words, they really motivate me to make new stuff! :)
I gave you three stars because I can see potential talent. The animation is a little rough, but I think it works with the context. I also like the message. Good job overall and keep the work up. I foresee great things!
This is nice work! The animation was not choppy and the drawings are nice. You can really tell that Greg is sad.
Some parts that need improvement is just things that need more detail, like the walk of the guy Greg spears and when the spear stabs him in the gut. In addition, the wind streams in the beginning and the sliding clouds could use some work as well.
Overall, great work! Looking forward to your future work
LoL it made me laugh :)
keep it up!
This is great, especially for a first animation. It looks well thought out and planned. The animation is nice, showing some real potential and it looks like you will probably make some awesome things in the future.