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My second attempt at a Flash animation. I was happy enough with this one to upload it to Newgrounds.


This has a very consistent art style and some very smooth animation. Overall, it looks decent. Also, pretty good since it's following a recent pattern of movies with short file sizes.

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Overall the style is constiant and you can tell you're learning the program. You've a good design sense and it looks like you know how to tell a story. But I would wait intill you're ready to tell a story with more debt. I see a promising start here.

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onlyDistort responds:

Thanks for the positive response, I will keep on trying to make a story with more depth, I find animation very enjoyable so I won't be stopping any time soon.

Was that little plant meant to symbolize something?

onlyDistort responds:

The whole video can be used as a metaphor for life's obsticals if you wish.

I'm sorry, but I have to point the finger down for this one. Although it's not bad, it lacks any kind of story, or content, or any reason to be. As much as it is, it could be a potato, a ball, or even a brick. The animation is fine, but this kind of things don't belong in Newgrounds. Keep up the good work, and you'l eventually come up with and idea worth of this website.

onlyDistort responds:

Thanks for your critical response. I am very new to animation and I wanted to hear what people thought about my animation so far. Next time I'll try and come up with a story, the idea is here, it's just not fleshed out. Again, thanks for your response.

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2.02 / 5.00

Feb 22, 2012
6:33 PM EST