I watched a bunch of videos on NG tonight...there were a couple I found okay, but this made me laugh. It's not GOOD, but who said it is SUPPOSED to be? I have seen effects that make things look like old film. That would be perfect for this!

I dont know, it had HQ pics but it really was pretty stupid and cheap. Seems like something I would have co-ordinated as a kid playing with toys - but by no means would I ever go forth and produce a film of it. Maybe instead of just shoting still character shots you could incorporate more stope motion, create your own characters etc. The script seems to be boring and feels like you kinda wrote the first thing you thought and was like OMG i bet this is funny! Well, it's not sorry. Get people to beta your script either friends, or on the BBS, and like I said put more effort into the animation.