I liked your style. Try to make your next upload smoother. But here's a 5/5 to get you pumped. I hope to see good things from you.
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This is a very short flash comic made from the first five pages of our comic book.
i'm still learning flash so my code work kinda sucks. part 2 will be up soon
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Cel-Studios responds:
five stars!!! hahaha i'm totally pumped now thanks
Would have liked to see a bit more for opening the story up, feels like a super sneak peak of a trailer. Like others had said, text is uncomfortable to read, and definitely need a mute button option. I don't think the music adds anything to the comic, just feels like it's there for the sake of it.
Some of the motion didn't really work for me either. If you are going make a flash comic, how much motion inside of the frames instead of just moving the pages around? That would be nice, wouldn't have to be all out animation, just some motion. You could add sound but only where it's going to add something to the immersion.
Good luck.
Cel-Studios responds:
thanks for the feedback.u had some good points, i'm still learning flash,i hope to have the kinks worked out by the time i post the next one
I'm hooked! I can't wait to see more! I really enjoyed your art style as well ^^
Cel-Studios responds:
thanks i'm glad ur hooked
cool stuff. seems like a good story. i like your style of drawing. kinda sucks you in, if only for a brief moment. coulda been longer definitely. my only complaint is it's too short! keep em coming dude.
Cel-Studios responds:
thanks dude
Need option to mute sound, text is too small to read in some parts.
Otherwise looks promising :)
Cel-Studios responds:
thanks dude i'll take that into consideration