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Funny enough this script came to me in a dream. Yup. So... um... yeah. Enjoy my brain jizz.
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Keep up.
I believe it was way too dramatised even for a comedy animation, also too long in my opinion. However, I see that you like what you're doing and you're putting some effort into it, so I think you should keep on animating, you've got something there.
Thanx man! Will definetly work on it!