Wasn't Expecting a stick cartoon.
To be honest, I was actually surprised by this.
While I agree that the voice acting and and audio need improvement, especially the audio, I didn't mind the other things.
The animation wasn't half bad and for stick drawings, too. I did like some of the voices, mainly the kid and the narrator as well as the nerd. They were the ones that stuck out the most to me.
As for the writing, while it wasn't all that good, it did have to potential to make me laugh a bit. I mean the writing and the situation kinda made me feel like I was back in the 90s and watching some show on NIckelodeon. (By that I mean stuff like Kablam, Angry Beavers, old Spongebob). You made that feeling a bit more with the Narrator sounding almost like Plankton from Spongebob and you even used Spongebob music here aswell.
Keep on Writing, dude. I might like to work with you one day once I master animation and drawing altogether.