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Balance v Chaos Preview

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Hey all,
I'm really excited at this is my first submission...even though it is just a preview of a larger work!
The main storyline will be that a spawn of chaos has awakened deep below some ruins in a forest. As he destroys the forest, the creature of balance comes to try and seal him away. Who will succeed? I have yet to decide! :P

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Has potential, needs polish

This is a good effort for a first submission, but for the full project I do have a few recommendations. My main criticism is that the images do require some clean up, as there are points where you can see lines that probably shouldn't be there. Also, I would advise to add some motion to the backgrounds, compared to the animations of the characters, the backgrounds seem dull. However, there is a lot of potential here. You seem comfortable with the program you used to draw, and the sound effects were quite good. Again, all that you need a bit of polish and the full product will easily be something I'd look forward to.

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It's got good potential, but if the animation isn't steeped up in the full movie/game, then it may as well be worthless.
At the moment, this looks like something I could create in my sleep, assuming I didn't have to create the soundtrack.

Not bad...

But very short for the portal, sorry.

Credits & Info

Views
1,694
Votes
3
Score
2.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 3, 2012
5:16 PM EST
Genre
Action