I hate that Twilly creature in adventurequest. its such a piece of crap. It is everywhere all over the freaking game. I just wanted to portray it as a horny sex animal. PLZ dont judge me that badly guys its my first cartoon
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Could have been much better. Massive overkill on the penis drawings - you really didn't need that much to convey your point. Sound quality could have also been better - yet again you can convey your point or ideas about a character while still allowing your audience to understand what is being said.
Really not bad, for a first attempt. Some refinement and practice could really allow your skills to shine.
WTF!!!
That was pretty funny, even if it was a little disturbing. If this is really your first cartoon it's awesome! The sound quality definately let it down tho. I was really struggling to hear the voices clearly. Looking forward to your next submission!
thanx man cheers,,the audio cant be that good cause like im making the sound using my video-camera at a busy city with traffic... I will do more stuff.. abit racist lol
PS: I did all the dialogue myself cause my younger brother somehow has a voice so much deeper then me and hes 14 ha
Dicks and balls
Not EVERYTHING needs to be dicks and balls. More subtlety. Still funny but I think you can do better.
Yea I can, this is my first cartoon,, didnt know much about flash, but thanks for the constructive criticism
I dont think I will ever play Adventure Quest now
Obviously you don't like it much either. Maybe you shouldn't play it then?
For a first flash its not too bad. Very spastic and choppy. I think you went a little over kill on the dick drawings though.
You show some skill here, but you gotta refine it a lot. I'm talking diamond in the rough, but very deep in the rough.
Voice acting needs to be less screaming into the mic and more speaking clearly.
Still, not too bad for a first flash. Take your time and try and make something else, lets see what you are really capable of.