Not bad, could use some work.
The audio and visual quality wasn't the greatest even though that's what you were going for. I did laugh at the way what you were talking about was represented, but if you're going for a simple design the best way to do it is make it look refined, even if you want it to look scribbly. Try cleaning up the audio quality so that it's easier to hear you and making the art sharper, and this could definitely be a good series.