Use less words !!
The information is good , but it will be better if it had more animation and less words. How ever I like it , specially the part at the end when you say who?, when? and all that stuff.And I don't think that the timeline was wrong.
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Adrellia Village:
Season 2, Episode 37.6:
The Persian War
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9/23/11 - The Persian War
NOTE: This was made for school, and it was graded on content, not animation quality. It was done against a deadline and was meant to educate rather than entertain.
Hope you enjoy!
well done
Not to bad for a educational animation. Bit confusing toing backwards in timeline though.
