pretty funny what got me was the dancing cat and the cat somewhat resembling a troll (idk???)
but next put in voice audio and less obvious dialogue like "this house for sale" and try to get someone to do your drawing for you (a friend maybe?) i see your animation has potential though
Author Comments
Ladies and Gentlemen, Boys and Girls, Trolls and Computer Hackers, this is my very first flash on Newgrounds. I made it myself. So please post nice reviews about this flash that I made. I know it might be a little boring at first but keep watching it gets better. If there's anything you want to ask me about my first flash send me a message on my NG account of course. And after new years I will submit more flashes that might be better than this. Its my first time getting started. But anyways enjoy.
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a 4 efort. but you need to work on your material, its your first, so its expected to suck, sory if thats mean, in the begining it was too long but it picked up later on. the story could have used a little work, and the ony funny part was the randomness of the cat dance. but again its just the first so build from this.
JerryJimmy551 responds:
Thank you for your review. I think I might make a second flash and I might submit it this Saturday. If I can.
DID YOU DRAW THIS IN MS PAINT????
sorry man but this was too poorly drawn for me, needs some shadeing or something... although props for the cop car its pretty legit.
JerryJimmy551 responds:
I did not draw in Microsoft paint I used Flash MX and yes some of the pictures were from the internet but the pictures of the door and the closet are my pictures.
sorry man
Well,im not trying to be rude man,but ill tell you an hounest opinion.First,well there really wasent an animation,just some random images with barly any movement.Second the enviroments were poorly drawn,but im not going to rant about tha(i cant draw at all lol),the main thing about this movie is IT IS TO SLOW. What i mean is the "story" progeses like a snail,and i feel the reson behind this was the humor was not there,there was allmost nothing in this that made me chuckle,im not trying to be rude or a dick,but even if you left the "animation" as it is,but at least had a few good jokes,it could be acceptable,but untill that time,im sorry my freand,this gets no stars.
JerryJimmy551 responds:
Well thank you for not being rude. Those images by the way were taken in my house. I'm sorry if the movie slowed down you computer and next time I will try to make things a little better. By the way I thought people were going to laugh when the cat was dancing but, I guess not. But maybe after new years I will make better movies. But anyway thank you for not being rude.
Credits & Info
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2.05 / 5.00
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- Dec 29, 2011
- 11:09 PM EST
- Genre
- Comedy - Parody