Normally I don't do this...
Commenting on videos that I give low scores to is not something I do. However, even as I shot this one down, I had to note the potential here. The main issue I have with this video, well, more often than not the audio desynched or simply didn't work. That's the tip.
Also, I see this a lot on Newgrounds. Announcing that you think your video is bad as you make it doesn't make it better. Revise your video, remove the bad parts, then submit it.
Again, I honestly see a lot of hope here. At the least this is the first video of this format I've ever seen. So, sharpen up, and become awesome. I hope this becomes nothing more than an old shame to you in flash videos to come.
Merry late Christmas, btw.