Good but...
...really need to work on plot structure. Even in comedy a solid plot is necessary.
Author Comments
Here you go! My first episode. This project has, for me, been going on a very, and I mean very, long time! I have worked on this same episode for about 5 years. Other stuff and lack of motivation has come in the way. Also I had very much trouble with the sound falling out of sync, but now it seem to be working!
This is a pilot episode, if you like it, I will make more. I was trying out different voices, so if you feel like the voice change on one of the characters it's because I re-recorded some of the lines that I felt were too sloppy. Over the course of this episode my skill of animation has improves aswell, so the continuity might be ruined by this, but please try to overlook such small things, since it is a pilot!
Enjoy!
Love Cluster
ClusterLaw responds:
Thanks! If you stay tuned you won't be disappointed :)
Had potenziality.
Maybe the music is too high for the entire sound of the voice.
The animations are not good but not bad too.
Work it on a bit and there will be better.
ClusterLaw responds:
Thanks :) Hope you got my sense of humour aswell!