Good
+Art and animation fine
+Funny enough
-Sound levels need balancing- the volume of the sounds is a lttle too high compared to the talking, which is hard to hear.
-Lip sync would be good- the next step
+Proper credits
Author Comments
This is the final animation I constructed for my animation class in college this year. I've gotta say that this is significantly better that my previous submission, and I hope some of you actually enjoy it.
Enyimus responds:
Thank you very much for the fair review. I will agree that the sound could have been balanced if I had the time; same goes for lip-sync.