Not that bad.
The graphics were decent enough for sprites, I’ve seen better but it’s ok. The plot was alright, some of the things do need work though. Some of the movement could have been done better, you shouldn’t have switched at time from a sprite to a regular drawing, pick an animation kind and stick to it. Plus it could be better if you didn’t use so many real photos, real photos unless soft porn, aren’t too welcome in a flash movie.
Graphics: 5, Sprite, real photos and some regular animation, the drawings weren’t that good, no shades or anything, kind of plain looking, the sprites don’t count seeing as you weren’t the one to make them.
Style: 5, A nice storyline overall but way too predictable and cliché.
Sound: 6, A sound effect for the button and the bullets, nothing special.
Violence: 9, Lots of gun fire… If only it was more tastefully done and not a blunt American way.
Interactivity: 4, A play button and the text switching button.
Humor: 5, Not really meant to be funny, but it had a couple pieces of humor.
Overall: 6, Just above average, keep improving, learn to use Sprites a bit differently ( sprite games are usually fun ) and I hope you do well, even though, I got here upon the random entry button and you aren’t likely to see this.