It was on the verge of peaking my interest and then it ended. You call it Episode 1, but at the end it says "Replay Preview". Was this an episode or preview. I hope future episodes will have more length and substance. Also make sure to stop the music at the end when people hit replay or the music will run together.
Thank you teejay. I will fix these errors.
See, THIS guy knows how to comment! Learn from him people!
Seems abit samey and short doesn't it? And the Author comments come across as a sort of 'yes yes i know fuck you i'm back lets just get this done painlessly as possible'. Either that or i'm reading too much into it.
But w/e man your life feel free to be bored of the work. i know i am.
You're reading too much into it lol... it's really just I don't know what to put.