Am I the only one who noticed..
You ripped off the Halo Reach Falcon for the craft they use to get to the mining ship.
I took off 2 points for the rip off, other wise nice work, keep it up!
Author Comments
This is the first part of the movie. the 2nd part comes later.
its about a mining process on planet x, but something went wrong and the military is sent to investigate.
this part cant me recembled with my old ones. this a complety new start.
SeNtoX responds:
its not ripped off,
look here
http://imageshack.us/f/195/dropshipg.
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thanks for the comment.
half way working
graphics are ok but you need to put more time in on the sound. all of the sound bytes over-lapped and made the scene with tom, the fat commander guy, more comedic then you intended. for the second one you are planning on making, go over the sound multiple times and make sure they don't overlap.
also, and this is my own preference, if you tone down the detail of your characters you can concentrate on on making the animation move smoothly.
SeNtoX responds:
yeah, i understand. i will take your review into concideration.
Good.
Average, but the music mixed in between, so I couldn't comprehend much of the stuff...
SeNtoX responds:
affirmative