PP - Sandcastles

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This week were starting a new series, Patch Parables. This one's a little shorter than Spirit Science, but the messages are just as powerful, if not even more thought pondering than SS. Don't worry, Spirit Science will be back in good time! But first, let's talk philosophy on life.

This weeks Parable - The Parable of the Sandcastles. An ancient Buddhist Parable which I read in the pocket "teachings of buddha" book i bought in Santa Barbara. (Spirit Quest 11 for more).

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Jordan Duchnycz and Vanessa Cuccia
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Intro Music by Seb Skelly

Special thanks to Andrew Golden, for without him this could not have been made!

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Please make more Spirit Science videos. I've been craving them.

I like the video but the children were brutal to the one child, they beat him with sticks and stamped on him, and at the end of the day they didnt even care if he was still living or not!

Pretty good, but...

Personally I think you should stay with Spirit Science. It's really disappointing to wait months for a new video, and then find out it's two minutes long. I know you're putting a lot more work into the new videos, which is awesome (they've really gotten a lot better), and I know you need to have a life, but a little parable is just so anti-climactic. My friends and I love your videos, and this one was good, but I think you should do more Spirit Science.

This was still good though, don't hate me. :3


It was a very nice story. I would like to hear more of this than crazy UFO theories labeled as "fact" in your spirit science flashes. Not that I didn't like some aspect of them being a small fan of science fiction. Although I'm sure you don't like to call it fiction.

Anyway this small story reminded me of small features of life on how we act in human life from beginning to end. We hold things in till the very end where we give it all away.

I marked a point off, not sure why. I wasn't wowed or anything so I'm marking one off to challenge you.

Very Cool stuff, still I got some notes

For the creators.
Guys! You have perfect visual art (at least next to perfect) Your script is also done very well, as the screen play. BUT please pay attention to vocal recording! The quality here is too important, and it was not very good. I suggest you use noise reducing (even Audacity allowes you to do one). Your voice actors are both well and good, but it's better to make several takes of one phrase untill it is perfect in one piece then making one out of several segments (word by word).

And another important thing to such a great poduction (and I mean it: what you are doing and what you are about to reach BOTH IS GREAT and deserves more work) is MUSIC. Just add some ambient background to it and this will give you more wathcers and listners!

Good job! All the best to you! 5/5 + 10/10! Sorry for my bad english

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4.60 / 5.00

Nov 28, 2011
11:00 AM EST
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