need a bit more
it needs a little bit more cause it was like 30 seconds and the end
Not bad. Not bad at all.
If you say this is your first flash, then you have a knack for this! But of course, this needs a lot of work, maybe better slide transitions and animation. Good job and good luck!
It looks like you've put some effort into this. However, there are too many movies like this submitted onto here. Just get some more practice and keep it up, I think you have the potential to become a great Flash artist.