update:
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arghhh damn averaging 3.3 again. bit disapointing. that front page willl always be out of my reach lol. Oh well you dont know until you try. Thanks for the votes anyway..
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Hey there :)
Well I finally finished my second episode. Been working on it for a few months on and off. I am a great believer in feedback from viewers and took into account (based on the first episode) that I could touch up on my animation. I have taken more time with this. I am also considering retouching the 1st episode so it is on par with this.
I just feel there is not enough action cartoons out these days. it is usually based on video game parodies, sick shorts and clocks.
So I thought I would try and contribute to hopefully a new style of animation. I am sure it will get mixed views but if you take the time to review it and give me some more advice on what you would like to see then please be my guest.
It is set in august when the riots in the UK occured and I had a few friends mention it would be cool to have a movie about riots. Even though I am disgusted that it happened.
Tony is a closed off character who lives a shut away life from people. He records in his book people who are targets and goes after them. Tony always has a good reason to go for the people he does. I dont want to say anymore because things will be revealed in episodes to come.
I want to see if this is good enough because I only do this as a hobby and I am currently doing a degree. So it takes up alot of my time and if I feel people are interested in it I would carry it on. Otherwise I get the point lol
Anyway enough yapping enjoy the film
Shaun
it's good
I actually watched this a few times.
I'm usually pretty critical and don't like stuff, but you have a cool style and a really good choice of music and mood setting.
You should definitely try to keep the same feeling that this flash has in any sequels.
you have my 5 to wish you luck on your way to front page, more people need to see this
Glad to hear you enjoyed it. I will always improve I have came a long way
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This is the first time I've seen this, but this is actually good! Sure the art wasn't good for the unhooded people, but, the animation was excellent! Not many animations are this way. this is a good hand drawn (if I can call it that) animation I've seen in five years on Newgrounds!
I agree man thanks for your feedback
DAT HAND
that hand the turned the page.. It felt so real! Like the game flashback..
haha what a game that is! brilliant
dude this is great
the only bad thing abou tit is the faces the movements were sooo fucking smooth and buttery ur a great animater now just go work the thos pescy non moving faces!!!
thanks man. yeah faces always do not do it. bad habit