Dude if seen so much stuff on NG then when you sent me this i loled for ages man its awesome. Keep going man you'll famous for doing flash some day....
best iv seen in years
The art was good! And the mouth was very well made!
But it was just creepy, in a funny way.
The voice needs improvement though...
You need to make your voice a little clearer and a little louder so that you are more understandable, and put some kind of cloth(socks?) to avoid that blowing on the mic sound.
But it was an ok flash, a lot of swearing, and I really dont understand the story, but ok! :D