it would be better
if it had a decent storyline to it. And if the turtle walked better. It would be helpful to look at walk sequences for animals to help you improve in that area. Otherwise nice job for your first submission.
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This is my first Flash Movie project, although it doesnt look like much it helped me understand
the software, I wanted to create something with a simple story line, im really happy with the way
it turned out.
Well, not really
The flash doesn't really need a story, but it has to trick you into watching it, something your movie did not do. And at least pay attention to the detail next time.
Ok for first.
But next time add a story to make the flash more interesting.
Some of the tweens are badly made. and improve next time on art.
But the raindrops were amazing!