Not to bad
I really liked your animation, the concept is quite good. There are some places where you can improve on but considering it is you first attempt at flash, Its good.
Author Comments
Hi!:) I hope you enjoy my little love story I created for my first flash project! I came up with a love story mainly because I am a sucker for love stories. I really enjoyed my experience while creating my movie and using flash for the first time. Really hope you like it. Thank you:)
Really cute...
Looks really good and cute for your first attempt at flash. I really enjoyed it. It has a very cute concept. Well done :)
Hmm..
The main problem with this one is not the animation although that could be improved. The problem is your drawings aren't nearly detailed enough. The story itself was alright, a bit cliche but overall watchable. Its good for your first animation anyway! :)
