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I'm a multimedia student and this is my animation project for a 1st year multimedia subject.
I enjoyed this experience a lot, seeing this is also my first acquaintance with Adobe Flash and Audition.
I would therefore appreciate some pointers to be successful with animations like these.

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Alright..

A nice little animation overall. I particularly don't care for the use of memes to drive your story and if you do use them, use them sparingly. The whole story seemed to drag along but it did have a nice surprising ending. Nice use of sounds; I find that typically is a sticking point for new users to flash. I think it could use a little more detail and better physics when ever he is throwing something; seems a little slow. Overall for your first project it's pretty good.

MEH ITS OKAY

...but don't use memes.
CREATE your memes.

Also, use colours etc.

It needs more work

It's okay to use meme but don't collide it with your character. It will only make the content more unnatural and even more hateful to the extent not original anymore. The dynamics are good, but it really need a lot of impact so that it will abide with the laws of physics (natural movement, if you know what I mean as if it is alive).