Great job for a first flash!
I enjoyed this and loved the punch line. There are a bunch of little things you can fix to make it better (e.g. The tires spin the wrong way at the beginning), but solid job overall!
Author Comments
This is my first flash movie ever made. This was a project submission to my flash subject. (edit: I got the concept from a commercial I watched before) . I know the animation may look funny and not that smooth(even I laugh at it sometimes XD ) but I enjoyed making this project to its deadline. And I am still learning to improve. Anyway just wanted to share it with everyone!
enciel responds:
Thanks for the review! I didn't notice that part but I'll definitely keep these things in mind when I make a new one! :)
Its your luck day!!!
For a first time flash movie submission ever, Enciel flash "Unlucky Day Off" was pleasant to watch. Great job Enciel with your work. I know you'll improve over time and I can see some promising skill as an artist already. The audio was a bothersome though and I did have to mute my speakers but that didn't keep me from watching this flash video. You get a 10 out of 10 stars.
Keep up the good work and I have bookmarked your profile to keep track of your grow progress over time. I can't wait until a year or so has past to really see what you can created.
Hope this make your day totally lucky. ; )
enciel responds:
Wow thanks for that rating! I did not expect that. Your words really inspire me! I'll definitely upload new stuff when I have the time may it be a game or a movie. I'll definitely work to improve. Again thanks a lot!
Funny
I love the way it was tied up in the end as this person is going to be a human pincushion after he jumps. Definitely bad luck.
enciel responds:
Thanks! :)
I don't know..
if you saw this commercial or not.
There is a dutch commercial that goes exactly like this, and it exists for years.
The moment fire broke out, i thought if there occurs a situation were by the guy has to jump out of the window with fireman standing below it's not your idea.
And than it happened.
So for the not original concept you get low score. The animation was alright.
enciel responds:
That's why I did not submit it in the original genre. :) I got the idea of it from a commercial too not a dutch one though. Thanks for the review anyway.
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- Oct 26, 2011
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