Great Intro
Waiting for the rest, the 7 is for the value of the intro and what may come next. Thanks for sharing.
Author Comments
This is the first haiku of my haiku series. Learn from Ben the wise man of New York, my sons.
Oh, and when the haiku is finished, that's the end.
Needs Improvement
Too short, quite boring, and not funny. I would suggest maybe making multiple haiku poems and sticking them in the same animation, possibly with a visual representation of what the line says.
I can see where you are going with this, but in it's current state, it's not very good at all.
- Jay