i don't understand
Well, that was weird as Hell...
But I think I like it. You've got quite a nice metafore there (if that was your intention): how something that is regarded beautiful for natural phenomena might be bizarre or even disturbing for living people. Like the sunset: it is beautiful, and we might compare a girls's beauty to the Sun, but when the girl acts like the sun and... "passes away," it's more quirky than anything else.
The idea was nice, and it was a pretty good flash for a first try (this is you r first submission, right?). Keep it up and improve yourself.
Thanks! And yes this is my first submission that wasn't blammed on here. My other ones were tests haha. And I did only get it last Monday so I am still learning. Thanks again!
i like the faces a lot :D
could have been a good short story. this was too short :P in my opinion.. reminds me of my old flash movies .. lol..
keep it up :D cheers!