Watchin' the Sunset

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So here is my newest Flash (First on NG). I hope you like it! The last one I uploaded got blammed because it was a test. I have gotten better but still need some practice haha.



i don't understand


Well, that was weird as Hell...

But I think I like it. You've got quite a nice metafore there (if that was your intention): how something that is regarded beautiful for natural phenomena might be bizarre or even disturbing for living people. Like the sunset: it is beautiful, and we might compare a girls's beauty to the Sun, but when the girl acts like the sun and... "passes away," it's more quirky than anything else.

The idea was nice, and it was a pretty good flash for a first try (this is you r first submission, right?). Keep it up and improve yourself.

slipperystudios responds:

Thanks! And yes this is my first submission that wasn't blammed on here. My other ones were tests haha. And I did only get it last Monday so I am still learning. Thanks again!

i like the faces a lot :D

could have been a good short story. this was too short :P in my opinion.. reminds me of my old flash movies .. lol..

keep it up :D cheers!

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2.64 / 5.00

Oct 21, 2011
4:35 AM EDT
Comedy - Original