Um.....

The video ends but the music keeps going...
You should make it reload the "play" menu after the flash video has completed. I guess the music quality depends on your taste but I didn't like it that much. The video was good, as was the narrative.

Fix the technical issues on maybe make the narrative more intimate and this will be great falsh. I hope to see more work from you.

Room for improvement

Good art but...

You might work on the proper audio or sfx effects especially the ambient sounds instead of dropping an mp3 song of RiverMaya's song (avoid looping the whole song). Work on your timing and movement transitions of your scenes. At all cost, avoid reusing scenes that we've seen before. There's also the roughness of the flow of your animation and your story.

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Amazing!

Yay Dr. Jose Rizal!
Amazing art.
Gusto ko rin maging magaling mag animate, hindi kasi ako ganun karungon mag guhit eh! Pero ang galing mo grabe!