Okay, for starters, it was just a background and showing characters for a majority of it. The way it was going seemed pretty good though. Also, if Yusei were to lose so easily, I don't think he would make such a poor mistake like leaving himself wide open for an attack AFTER Stardust Dragon was played and only having 2000 Life Points left. As I said though, I liked how the story was going, and even if the duel was kind of lame, I liked how you went about showing the duel. So for the stuff I liked about it, I'll give you 4.5 stars ^w^ Unfortunately, it looks like it's been too long for this to get another part though :/