(i uploaded a previous version but damn, i forgot the preloader... and i wanted to delete it but i cant so there... sigh. two of these.)
before making them it's not a video comments, yes, it's not an animation/video..i just wanted to find out what could be done to improve the guitar work....i'm out of them ideas where i could find opinions, so what the heck. NG.
after reading the history of kamikazes during ww2, i decided to pen a song for all the airmen during the second world war, in the pacific theater, both the "red-balls" and the "big blues"...i thought, if Iron Maiden had "Aces High", i might as well have something for the other side of the world.
anyway, i've been working on this song for a month now, and i decided that instead of the original rock-ish tempo, i decided it might sound better with 3rd octaves and power metal riffing. forgive my shredding and lead skills, it was just this afternoon that i decided to place a bridge part in it. it still has no lyrics, bass lines and drum lines... but i think i'd like to know what improvements can be made regarding the guitar work..
also, forgive the horrible background sounds.... i have no money for a soundproof room, and egg cartons don't work too well....