the silent charcters
Just finsished watching this animation, and I thought it was great. The absence of dialouge didnt matter because it helped build up the atmosphere of the animation.
Now heres some constructive criticism.
The animation was a bit choppy. For example the part when the boy was walking up the hill. In that scene it looks like there arent any joints in the knees of the boy.
Other than that it was a great animation so a 9 is my rating.
Thanks for your comment, my idea is to make silent characters, but I think in future animations, I'll put voices.
i will try to improve movements for my next animation.
thanks for watching
I'd have liked if it had had dialogues or text (not necessary speaking), I liked the idea and quality; some parts was robotic but nothing serious, personally I liked your animation. and it was random xD. that's the reason I've liked your movie, good job.
thanks,I will try to improve movement of the characters in my next job.
Not half bad...
You might need a bit of dialog, and the articulation of the characters weren't very good (No offense) but you needed to bend the limbs a bit more. I like the way you made zombies actually know what to do. (As in, not like just attacking mindlessly.) But where did the monsters come from when he was sliding down the hill from the tombstone? Really good, 9/10.
hi, the animation has no dialogue because I do not speak English very well, maybe I could put dialogs when someone help me with the voices.
and the monsters were down the hill to stop the character.
Thanks for your comment, I'll keep in mind for my next job.
and thanks for watching
It was ok
It wasn't bad but it seemed a little random, not terrible just lacking something.
thanks for comment, but it would be better if you were more specific. because your comment does not help me improve.
but thanks for watching my animation.