First of all, you are right about the sound quality (a bit low), but I have to say that the voiceactor did a good job (for example when he said "time is on my side" he used a very subtle nuance in his tone).
Your visual artist used rather unusual techniques for the graphics, I personally like that style, an original way of drawing which I haven't seen in this quality before.
Since this is "just" a trailer I can't make a final judgement on the story, what I hear so far sounds interesting. Some elements (Virus Outbreak, Timetravel) are a bit overused in the movies, but that's no reason why you can't give this storyline a unique touch!
I really, really hope you can put the different storypieces together and create a imaginary world of its own - as far as I see it you got the talent to do so.
Good luck with the project, for what I can see so far this is going to be something I would like to watch :-)
But I sort of remember playing a game like this before.
As for the name, how about Flux Redemption?
Can't wait for the game or some sort of a demo to come out. And some gameplay video would have been nice.
It may have been my previous Genesis game lol. But yeah Flux Redemption is a good title. Would love to hear more on the reason for the choice.
Time travel and paradoxes are hard things to work with, but I think you can pull it off. Indie games are the best because their artists put so much work into it, and I hope you do the same.
-Story - I was happy that this didn't seem to be the old recycled stories that you see nowadays, that you put work into this. The character seems interesting, and so does the setting. I like the fact you eluded to the fact you'll have to hide to not create time paradoxes, that seems like an interesting piece of gameplay that everyone forgets and combines the perfect action and sneak game. The fact that a single person can control time without an outside influence is odd, but can be overlooked.
-Gameplay - Not quite so happy with the fact that you haven't given us any gameplay footage. I can't really judge how far you are or what it will look like without anything to look at.
Lastly, I will suggest changing the name. Its just, too overused, you think of giant explored planets and other random fantasy stuff with the word Genesis... And the name doesn't quite fit the game.
Its a great idea though, would much prefer seeing it in action. Sry cant donate, not allowed to use my money ]:<
Thanks for the feedback. It looks like you have done your homework and read over a lot of the information I have. I thank you for that. Currently we just have some sample game play stuff, but I do not want to reveal it in its unfinished form. Ive heard from alot of people that I should change the name and I think im going to take in that advice. Ive started to think about other names and am completely open to suggestions.
He's a time traveling zombie.
lol. You wish haha.
cool..but dude get the mic out of mouth
lol couldnt understand you half the time just saying...
Sorry its not really the voice actors fault. I had to convert the file so it would work in flash. Not to mention audio compression effected the quality. Im doing my best to fix it. Ive also attached subtitles so hopefully it helps.