Please Watch more than 10 seconds before you critique. this is a 3 1/2 minute flash that is on a sensitive subject.
We were assigned this project in my flash class as a midterm assignment. We needed to write a Haiku, so I wrote what I know about, PTSD. I have nightmares every night so I don't really like sleep. This was a way to get some of it out.
All of the music in the video is recorded by me. and the War Sounds were orchestrated by me. I am more of a music person, than the visual side but I enjoyed the challenge of putting this together.
I do realize the Artwork in here could be better but give me a break this is my first true flash that I have done.
If you like the music, I have all of my albums Free right now @ Http://MrAcousticD.bandca mp.com
True...
your animation wasn't the best, but the message or I should say, your feelings shined through. I am truly sorry for what you went through, my best friend from high school only finally got over "it" 5 years later...source: my experience OIF 06 & OEF 10 Keep posting!
Brilliant pathos
While the animation was a bit choppy, the story structure was paced brilliantly and you feel exactly what the main character feels. It's good you got the courage to bring this out.
Next time.
Next time make text not selectable, make something with colors and...a good song. Agree with review before me - if you're still in school - it's very good work! Keep it up...In school time I even didn't knew - what is Flash)))
i was a lil generous
considering your still in school obviously for this... what mostly got you brownie points was the story although short i saw brief animation sequences which captured the climate like when he shuffled himself against the wall. Id like to see you continue this and work a little longer on the art. I know deadlines suck... keep at it