Very Short, Could have done better.
Im Sorry, but you could have done a lot better with this. Maybe making it longer then about a second and so that sound has something to follow with on the stage instead of it ending so fast and sound keeps going.
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Delivery Boy flies through the sky! Hopefully he won't die!
----THE ANIMATION IS MEANT TO LOOK ROUGH----
The animation is meant to look rough because of the world Delivery Boy lives in. He lives in a world of white and only a few colors, like blue, black, red, etc. He delivers stuff with his trusty luger.
----CHALLENGE----
Whoever can find the 2 lugers wins a prize. PM me the locations for the prize.
Come on bro...
Animation meant to look rough cause he's a delivery guy? That is such a cop-out answer. You just didn't want to try that hard. This is one of your two submissions (Both still under judgement as of right now). Seems to me that you just wanted to have a cartoon on newgrounds so bad that you threw anything you could make up instead of attempting to make your first submission a good one. I'm not saying it has to be a masterpiece, just put some effort into it. Myself - I have no submissions at the moment. I am currently working on a video for a song I really enjoy but I refuse to post it until I am completely happy with every aspect of it. I think you should do the same :)
EpicDoopliss responds:
Ummm... the animation is rough becuase he lives in a colorless world. .-.