I see potential here, the title is a bit much, could use some tinkering. For a first time run or pilot it was pretty good. I'd watch more. Try to living up the animation though, don't be afraid to take the comedy out side the realm of gaming either, not everyone plays sonic lol. I like to see your story board if you have one, if you don't have one then make sure you create one for the next animation, it''ll help alot with timming and sync issues. Also flesh out your character designs, If you need any help with anything I can offer you a hand or pencil so to speak. One last thing, don't worry so much about negative reviews, they are a waste of time.