just 2 things
The animation was ok but could be better and the story was funny but it wouldn't make me laugh out loud but other than that good job.
Author Comments
I believe I came up with this after someone requested I animate a dinosaur bursting through a window. I'm happy with the turnout, despite the harrowing fact that I misspelled "dying."
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Cool concept. It was kind of funny. The voice acting was off a bit. Entertaining but a little short. Other than that I suppose I liked it. Do you have any other flashes, since you said you made this years ago
FashionNYT responds:
absolutely i do. i'm still in the process of uploading everything i figure is worthwhile. go to my page, brothuh
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.... failure .... nice try though this must be a first so i gotta give you a 1 for that but it was pretty bad though.
FashionNYT responds:
yeah dog i made this years ago. your one is respected and not taken as insulting in the least
Just being honest...
It could use some work. I honestly wasn't impressed with the humor content, and it could use a lot more effort in terms of animation. But the thing I really need to criticize is the non-functioning back button, it's easy to fix but you really should have tested it before posting your video. I think you're definitely capable of doing better and will ask you to please not be too discouraged
FashionNYT responds:
hahah yeah man i made this way back in the day when i thought i was going to be like homestarrunner and have a whole flash site where the back button would actually go somewhere.
lol
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