Preloader and some creativity
I agree with SS4FlameAlchemist that the first missing aspect on the flash is the preloader .
The preloader gives the flash submission a professional entry presentation of a Newgrounds oriented project. Second : Drew is like a Goku twin . why not making the character tweaks in the hair. 3. The fight was short and so uninteresting cause Goku was the agresive and Drew doesnt stand a chance of counterattacking in a fair manner of background and strenght . Credicts: This is a last aspect that flashmakers shouldnt miss to finish a flash with grace telling people who conceived the flash and the origin of the contents in a flash.
As SS4 Flamealchemist stated theres no easy way you would know the start and the end of the flash until you watch it several times realizing the movies goes into a continiuos loop.
Just Remember DogDays your flash is good but the next projects in flash be sure to polish them well and your submissions scores will impove better!