Ehh...
It was okay. Not necessarily blammable, but on the border. Make the jumping jacks shorter and maybe have the two guys fight for like 5-8 seconds and it would be good.
Ok, just read the title, and thats it. Just a physics practice. (Changed the Author thingy since it's not necessary... >.>
Ehh...
It was okay. Not necessarily blammable, but on the border. Make the jumping jacks shorter and maybe have the two guys fight for like 5-8 seconds and it would be good.
Well, I don't think it was necessary. In the clan at FA, they only wanted an exercise that has do to with jumping jacks. So, here. I only added the last part for lol's. Plus, that is how high I jump while doing jumping jacks. :3
You don't need to put that in the Author Comments
It is self explanatory. And as for the flash, it was a guy in a jumping jacks loop, with a counter. Not interesting, or that creative, until the guy punched him in the face. Unexpected, but not really funny. The sounds were rather awful. It was too short, boring, unexciting, and I don't see what this had to do with physics, other than the stick figure's body movement (which isn't all that complicated). And if you are worried about plagiarism, you shouldn't be (not with this flash anyways). And the stealing policy is always there, so no need to point it out unless it keeps happening, in which case you should tell Tom Fulp or something. Sorry for the low score, I just can't give it a higher score and still feel like my point was made. Remember: stick figures are usually a last resort for a flash, use comedic timing better, and don't rant in the Author Comments. The review section is for ranting (which I hope I demonstrated well enough), as is the responses to reviews. It seems that you have flash talent, but go converse with funny people to get good ideas for flashes.
Well, this is my first time uploading and I just followed what they "asked". I'm trying the re-edit the commentary.
To the point, well executed.
very nice, simple dlash, nothing to brag about, but it gave me a giggle
don't worry...
no one, and i mean NO ONE is going to steal this and call it their own. besides, no one has to pm you anything, you put it on the internet, on newgrounds no less, which makes it creative commons, which means anyone can do whatever they want with it, as long as they link to you, regardless of anything you say.
the sounds are just awdul, the idea was kinda funny though. so two for funny idea.