Some interesting imagery

but generally messy and doesn't make much sense.

+ Quite long with a lot to see
+ good choice of music
+ some interesting art
+ OK story

- music Not credited
- Hard to understand what is going on for example:
there is clearly a war going on, but it makes little sense as I can't make out who is on what side or why. Why is the random australian dressed as a roman?gladiator? Why does he lose his flesh, then gain his flesh, then lose it? Why does this make him able to leap 30 feet in the air?
etc. etc.
- No proper ending/replay

Altogether a lot of talent is more or less wasted in a messy production. May I politely suggest that you collaborate with someone who can help you to organise a project into a much more finished submission.