visuals werent bad, music was a bit to busy though imo. All the audio seemed to be coming through the centeral channel(its hard to tell with the music though) mabye a pan of the vocal tracks to charachters relevant postions on the stereo plain. Apart from the busy music and the stereo positions, the balance of volumes in the mix wasnt quite right.
On the plus side, Gordons voice made me laugh hard.
For a first animation I am very impressed and as such I hope you keep it up. I would like to see more from you as this shows potential.