This is good man. Nice job!!! :D
Thanks a lot.
Best Punch Noise Ever
You done good. You could make it rated lower than the 13+. I dig the humor in each sign and you totally saved the best of hers for last. Good pay off in the end. For having only done so much in Flash this turned out well. Nice job. Now if only you had a nice little bus riding along on the preloader. :P
Thanks for the comment. It is rated 13+ because i put violence at mild, so whatcha gonna do if its an automatic rating system. I almost put a check on suggestive text, but i chose not to.
And yes a bus would have been nice, but the idea fell though.
Pros: Good idea. I started laughing after the second ad, and the ending was pretty neat. I think you used the idea pretty well. The movement of the characters was also realistic a lot of the time.
Cons: Some of the animation needs work, like when the guys rubs his chin or the lady first comes up the stairs. In fact, the animation seems to get better as we progress through the movie.
The sound effects weren't the best, but that wasn't much of a problem.
Overall: 9/10 for pros and 7/10 for cons. Average = 8/10. Keep the animating up.
Well thanks for the comment, and also pointing out the pros to the animation. I knew the chin rub and the stairs were not the best, but i also ran out of time and couldn't do a 3rd run through on those parts.
Thanks for laughing at the jokes, it is kinda funny that you started laughing at the same point that most other people did that, I showed this to, before I submitted it.
I liked that!
It made me laugh. The premise was unusual for the NG material I usually find.
The animation of the guy's arm was a little spotty(try defining the joints a little better), but the character design itself was unique.
Thanks, the characters were fun to design, I based them off reptiles when i did thumbnails of them. And i liked that look best.