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My first flash (button)

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I re uploaded this video with a button this time.

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I See...

Well, I can't blame you as it's your first button, however I'll review it to the best of my extent:

> Try some text instead
> Add a button shape and texture

That's all I can think of, however the prime example of a well done 'button' is the Madness Day button, when you're starting a flash file.

I Couldn't Understand One Word!

I Couldn't Understand One Word! I Heard Giberish, And Rename The Movie To The First One Not I Have A Button.

mbstudios909 responds:

I uploaded it again but this time with a button

Well..

Pros: Art isn't too bad, most animation pretty well done

Cons: First of all, lip syncing was out and not heaps well done (but I shouldn't go on about it because I've never tried it in my life). The real problem with this, is that i can't really seem to get what's going on. Mostly it is because of the hard-to-understand voice acting.

Overall: Not too bad, really. Keep working on the animation.

Thinker

This is good for a first flash. The animation is fluid, though extremely simple. There's a serious message hidden in there somewhere as well, though I think that the brevity of the flash and its quick pace hurts that message somewhat.

I give you 7/10 because I can see room for improvement, but I gave you a 5/5 where the score actually matters because I'd like to see you keep working on flash animations.

Credits & Info

Views
2,458
Votes
4
Score
2.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 19, 2011
12:24 AM EDT
Genre
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