Not bad at all dude, you must keep practicing with V-cam, and also you can put voices for characters.
it should be longer
good for a first
but first the music wasn't related at all and the bitmap tracing wasn't on pixels so it looked kind of ugly so my tips is too keep training and download v-cam (it's good)
Are those your characters?
I mean it's definately game worthy stuff
...and are those Penguins with boobs in the background?
It was okay until...
OK so I kinda liked it. I didn't understand what was going on at all but it was still OK. Its just... Why does it loop? You could just put a replay button and a little story and it would have been scored much better. But other than that good 1st try.