Retrieve the Tri-Shove

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Need constructive criticism.

2011-09-17 06:20:42

Art and animation was okay...

but what is the point of this?
Can't seem to understand the story your trying to show...

Siojinettes responds:

Well, it's just my first attempt at my characters being in an animation. I don't know how to help with the story, should I add dialogue?

2011-09-17 05:59:40

very good

but all it needs is som carractor intridution or devlopment and or a plot and then it would be epic

Siojinettes responds:

So what can I do to improve it?

2011-09-17 05:15:03

Epic end :)

I like it!

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